Write a description of someone. It can be anyone at all.
Now look at a real person, or a picture of someone, and write
another description.
You should find that the second description will be much
better.
Real people have:
stray hairs sticking out
spots and pimples
pieces of cotton hanging from their sleeves
broken nails
cuts and bruises
scuffed shoes
Fictitious people - ones you have made up in your head - need
these things as well. A spotty face or a torn coat or a noisy
sniff may not be important to the story, but they will make your
characters seem much more real.
Descriptions bring your stories to life.
Section 1: Describing People
It is very easy to introduce characters into a story without
giving the reader any idea what they look like. You ought to
describe every character, but don't write pages and pages of
description or your readers may fall asleep. This exercise allow
you to describe someone easily. In each of the first seven boxes
is a list of words to choose from. The last box allows you to
enter some text of your own.
Press the 'update' button to see your description.
Press the 'reset text' button to reset the text in the boxes.
Section 2: Describing Places
Buildings
You have probably written lots of stories where people are in
buildings. Did you tell your readers what those buildings were
like or were you too busy making people fight, or do magic, or
find skeletons under beds?
Choose a building and two adjectives from these lists:
Section 3: Describing Actions
Action words are verbs. The words which
describe actions are called adverbs.
Choose a verb and a suitable adverb. (Some combinations will not
be sensible.)