Descriptions

Try this:

Write a description of someone. It can be anyone at all.
Now look at a real person, or a picture of someone, and write another description.

You should find that the second description will be much better.

Real people have:

Fictitious people - ones you have made up in your head - need these things as well. A spotty face or a torn coat or a noisy sniff may not be important to the story, but they will make your characters seem much more real.

Descriptions bring your stories to life.


Section 1: Describing People

It is very easy to introduce characters into a story without giving the reader any idea what they look like. You ought to describe every character, but don't write pages and pages of description or your readers may fall asleep. This exercise allow you to describe someone easily. In each of the first seven boxes is a list of words to choose from. The last box allows you to enter some text of your own.

Press the 'update' button to see your description.
Press the 'reset text' button to reset the text in the boxes.

 

The had skin and hair. was dressed in a   and a .


Section 2: Describing Places

Buildings
You have probably written lots of stories where people are in buildings. Did you tell your readers what those buildings were like or were you too busy making people fight, or do magic, or find skeletons under beds?
Choose a building and two adjectives from these lists:

The was and .     

 

Streets
You probably have you characters walking along streets. Do you describe the streets?
A street can be .     

 

Forests
If you have never included a forest in one of your stories you are very unusual. The way that you describe a forest is very important to your readers. Here are four different descriptions of the same forest:

Choose a forest description:

Now it's your turn. Can you write a description of a really terrifying forest?


Section 3: Describing Actions

Action words are verbs. The words which describe actions are called adverbs.
Choose a verb and a suitable adverb. (Some combinations will not be sensible.)

verb: adverb:      

 

Finally, see if you can match the following actions with their descriptions:

The lion so loudly that

As the lightning

The car through the tunnel so fast

The warrior's sword the rock with such force

When the door

The smoke upwards